Pretty Crazy

Neat idea. It will be interesting to see where this goes. About the 'feeling' of it. Your character has no emotions, shouldn't she be afraid? Also, you're not telling us ...

I don't have any comments or suggestions. But I thought I'd just say how cool this is! So many possibilities. What will happen next? I really like the idea of ...

For our warnings died within the fog as lightning struck Mary Jane. LOL for some reason, this made me laugh. Just the image I got in my head. I think ...

You told me to be harsh so. . . I still don't know where this is going. Which isn't that bad. I guess I'm the kind of person that doesn't ...

OK, this is certainly interesting. Although I have no clue what's going on, I'm fascinated. So many questions, like who's Drake? How did he just vanish? Where and at what ...

OK I wasn't expecting that. To tell you the truth, this isn't the most exciting story I've ever read. It needs something, something to define it. Sorry I'm not being ...

Wow, :shock: wasn't expecting vampires. OK I admit I'm not a vampire fan. Actually I don't like 'em at all, but that's my opinion. Now I have an idea of ...

Hello ofir, here is your review. In many ways I wish i could write like you. Your characters are so real, each of them having their own personality. That takes ...

First thing, what does a rock star have to do with the plot? Unless he has some important role, I'd suggest spending your time showing us more of this cool ...

It was dark out and the only things visible were the head lights of rapidly moving vehicles in the distance. I liked it as soon as I read this! Some ...

Aw man! I had a review all written up nice and now it's gone! Waa! Oh well, third times the charm. :roll: I like your writing style it's flows nicely ...

Um, I really like the idea of being able to become any form of life of any time-period. But does it have to be like gods and stuff? Just the ...

I've never heard of this either. The constant changes of POVs were confusing but I managed to figure it out. Your description is good, especially at the beginning. I plan ...

Did you write these yourself? They're amazing. . . :smt001 The depth of feeling. . . wow. . . if the words are this beautiful then imagine if they were ...

It does make sense. It would be a good song with music. Your rhyming is good but there's a few parts that need something I'm not sure what, but let's ...